Updated Script

<<The Last Man Standing.    Swift Getaway Productions

This is the main dialogue scene...the majority of the film is based around an action sequence.

Starring:

Georgie Watson: Jimmy 'JJ' Jones

Joe Haddow: Joseph 'The Bear' Bayter

Ellis Snell: Hernay Kapala 'Moss'

Ed Stow: Big Eddy

Jack Barber: Jackie B

plus many more...

Script:

(Ambient discussion) - In the background of the setting.

Narration: 

Close up of Jimmy Jones smoking

Jackie B : throwing chips into pile  i raise

Jimmy Jones :  you feeling lucky hernay

Jackie B: twisting a pocket knife

Hernay : Jimmy you joker

Jackie B : We playing cards or what ?

Hernay : Well we would be if that joker delivering the package actually got her on time

(Tracking shot) of Big Eddy with briefcase containing "drug money"  as he approaches gangs headquaters

Jackie B finally bout time

Big Eddy : Its all here

low angle shot of the breifcase with JJ in the background

Jimmy Jones: So its all going ahead yh

High angle shot of group putting their glasses together

Group opens the briefcase (group shot)

(close up) of content of the briefcase containing ripped up paper

Jimmy Jones: What the f*** !

Freeze frames of group drawing guns

(mid shot) of hernay cocking gun

(long shot) of Big Eddy making a run for it

(Tracking shot of bullet )

(Close up) of Big Eddy being shot in the head

Jimmy Jones : nice shot hernay

Hernay : Thanks

Jackie B: F*** the cops

(long shot) of cops entering the building

Jimmy Jones: Theirs the assholes

Machine gun firing at the cops

cops ducking

(tracking shot) of the gang leaving the room

(Jump scene/tracking shot) of cops chasing the gang

(mid close) up of Jackie B hiding under the table

(mid long shot) of cop searching the place

(two shot) showing the cop bieng shot off some stairs

(Low angle shot) of the cop falling to the floor

Jump scene

(Long shot) of Jackie B being shot in the back by a cop while attempting to make a run for it

(low angle shot) of body on the ground and cop approaching the body